IETLS Writing task 2: Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned

Topic:

Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Topic analyzing:

- What type of essay is it? - Agree/disagree

- What is the main issue? - Key words: sports

- What are the sub issues? - Micro key words: dangerous sports, ban

- What instruction are you given? - Instruction words: agree or disagree - give personal view

Answer:

Playing sport is an essential part of life, and although most would choose a simple and safe sport for themselves, a large number of people love playing dangerous sports. However, some people argued that dangerous sports should not be allowed. In my opinion, we should carefully go through the pros and cons of these sports before deciding on it.

One reason why many dangerous sports are strongly opposed is that they are a threat to human safety, which is considered the most important matter in all activities. Many serious accidents in sports are reported every year around the world, especially in adventurous games. For example, in Formula One car race, participants always drive at high speed and put themselves at the risk of having their car overturned or hit the stands, causing severe injuries or even death for not only the drivers but also the audience. Because of these unwanted incidents, many have to suffer from permanent disabilities or loss of family members.

On the other hand, dangerous sports are loved by many because they give players the adrenaline rush and the sense of superiority that nothing can replace. Furthermore, many of them are traditional sports that are associated with religion and culture. For instance, bullfighting is one of the most famous symbols of Spain, and many have died participating in this game. However, the idea of banning this game has received massive public outcry because it hurts the sentiments of the countrymen. Thus, it is important to consider the merits and demerits of dangerous games before taking any decision.

In conclusion, I believe it is necessary that all the positive and negative points of dangerous sports be considered when considering banning them.

(283 words)

Comment:

This is the most I can think of when writing about this topic. I know it is quite short comparing to the answer for other topics, but I hope it is just enough, not too long, not too short. My strong point is grammar and vocabulary, and the only thing that I worry about is idea. My mind often goes blank whenever I sit in an exam and I do not know what to write at all, mostly because of my lack in life experience. As a result, I need to accumulate ideas for different topics before the test.

I would love to receive comments or other essays from you. I think I will learn a lot from your essays – especially when it comes to ideas.